Snowhite

Snowhite didn`t have a mother since she was a little girl.

Her father (the king) married a new wife, who was very pretty, but also gallous jealous and mean.

Every day she asked her magical mirror: “mirror mirror on the wall, who is the most beautiful woman in the city?”

Every time the mirror answered: “you are the most beautiful woman, my queen”.

Time passed, and Snowhite grew and became very pretty.

One morning the queen asked her mirror the same question, and the mirror answered this time:

“you are very beautiful my queen, but Snowhite is more beautiful than you”.

The queen was very angry, and decided to kill Snowhite.

She called the hunter and told him to kill Snowhite in the forest, and to bring her heart in a small box.

The hunter took Snowhite to the forest, but could not kill her.

He told her that the queen wanted to kill her, so she can`t come back to the palace.

Snowhite walked in the forest, and suddenly saw a small house of dwarfs.

She became their friend, and lived with them in their house.

One day the queen asked again her magical mirror again the same question:

“mirror mirror on the wall, who is the most beautiful woman in the city?”

The mirror answered: “you are very beautiful my queen, but Snowhite is more beautiful than you”.

The queen was very angry, because she understood that Snowhite was still alive.

She decided to kill her by herself.

She dressed up like an old woman, and took with her poisoned apples.

She arrived to the dwarf`s house and called out loudly:

“tasty apples, who would like to eat tasty apples?”

Snowhite got out of the house and asked for an apple.

She took a bite from the poisoned apple and immediately fell on the ground.

The queen was happy and went back to the palace.

When the dwarfs came back home from work they saw Snowhite on the ground, and thought that she was dead.

They cried a lot, and decided to keep Snowhite with them, because they loved her very much.

They built a big box made of glass, and put Snowhite inside.

An A year after, a handsome prince passed by the dwarfs` house, and saw Snowhite inside the glass box.

She looked beautiful and sweet.

The prince opened the box and kissed Snowhite on her lips.

That moment Snowhite spit the bite of the apple, and woke up.

The prince and Snowhite fell in love with each other, and the prince asked her to marry him.

Snowhite said: “yes”, and was very happy.

The dwarfs were happy too, when they saw Snowhite was alive.

Snowhite and the prince got married, and lived happily ever after in the prince`s palace.

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