Sweets Land

One night I was in bed thinking ,about what you may ask well about everything.I mean so much is going on in life.My mammy had a baby girl called Clodagh.In school I am practicing for my play.There is a new girl in school, and tomorrow is Saturday.I am excited for swimming lessons on Sunday.I better go to bed.Ok it’s morning now so i’m going to get out of bed.I am much more comfortable. So now that i’ve  introduced myself.I will start my story, and this is all true.So once I was just sitting on the toilet in school.If you really need to know it was a poo.Anyway I noticed something weird like a tiny twinkle which  was becoming  bigger and bigger.It opened a portal!So I walked in.In front of my face was a world of sweets.I thought it was Hansel and  Gretel but it wasn’t. There  were lollipop trees and gingerbread houses. I was amazed .Then something weird happened. A big blob of jelly approached me.It shouted  hello!It was really weird.

I said hi.Then a giant doughnut came towards me and mr jelly. she said hi.Then we said hi.She asked us if we want to go to the beach.I said sure because I love the beach.Mr jelly just came along.When we got to the beach I looked around.It was so pretty!The sea looked as if it was made of melted blue bon bons .The sand was made of yellow bon bon dust. I think that’s why it’s called bon bon beach. We all went swimming. I never knew doughnuts are so good at swimming. I looked out at the view and saw a tall building. I asked Mrs doughnut what it was and she said it was the palace.Yes the kind of palace where  a  princess  or queen would live. knock knock!oh no my teacher Ms Mchale was at the door!I have to go back. sorry guys I need to go home but i’ll be back soon!I ran off.when I got  back to  school I came out of the toilet.Mrs Mchale shouted Ailbhe! you’ve been in there for an hour and a half!Im sorry IM sorry it won’t happen again.                                                                                                      THE    END