cinderella

O once upon a time in a place palace far away.

there was a girl named sinderella cinderella  she lived with her stepother stepmother  and her two daughters.

she used cinderella as a maid.

a A few days later the prince phnounced a ball in the palace

the mother and  her daughters got roady ready for the ball and left .

at the last momeht the mice who were cindarella‘s 

good friends prepared hed her a dress she put on the dress and thanked them. and then She ran toward the carriage

the mothers daughters saw thay had their itenson? cindarella‘s dress so thex  she started to tear apart drop every thing and cinderella burst into tears and ran the other way. Ccindarella was alone her fairy god mother?

come came and she was making made her a dress,shoes and a carriage but she warhed her that at 12:00 the magic would disappear. cindarella come came to the ball and she danced with the

prince. להעביר לדף הבא – T the prince

fell in tove with her but cindarella hoticed that it was five minutes to midhight and

she had to get home.S she ran home toward the exit buts

לחבר לדף 7

on the way home she drooped her shoes and the prince llooked looked fov for weeks for the girl that

lost her shoes.  cinderella‘s sisters tried on the shoes but it didnt match. Tthe prince was redy to

leave but then he heard khocking from the basemant.

he opened the door and saw cinderella, the shoes fits cinderella.

S since tuen then the prince and cinderella were toghether

and they lived happylly happily ever arter till that day.

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excellent gob.