cinderella

There was once a kingdom ruled by the king. and The the king‘s son was a son who asked for wanted  a bride so he invited all the girls (women)  in the kingdom to the ball and her life? Cinderella wanted to be there also (appear in her bed) but the  stepmother did not let her go. Cinderella made a dress Simla (and when the stepmother went to buy from the needs that came to Cinderella he danced and sang with her prince . She remembered that the stepmother had come home at 12:00 and returned home) לא הבנתי את המשפט הזה… The prince was looking for her in the kingdom, and when found her he Matza married her and they lived happily ever after. 

-The End – 

Yuli 

spelling – 10

grammer – 20

clarity and coherency – 15

five elements – 35

Total – 71

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