Rapunzel
by Itamarschool
Copyright © 2018
Once there was a man and a woman who dreamed of children. They knew that one day their dream would come true, and after a few months the woman had to have a child
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One day the wife of the man asked her husband him to go and take some of the cows. he thought and agreed. on that for several nights he stole the neighbor’s cows without them her seeing him, but one night the neighbor caught up with The man while he was stealing. at the time of the theft
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The man asked for her forgiveness but she did not forgive him, she made an agreement with him that he could take from her cows as much as he needed but when his wife gave birth to her neighbor the baby would take her.?
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The man agreed, and when the woman gave birth to the neighbor? she took the girl and called her Rapunzel because this plant Mother ate before she was born. After a few years Rapunzel grew up and fell in love with the prince and they lived in wealth and honesty.the end
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ניקול היקרה
לא כל כך הבנתי את הסיפור לצערי.
Spelling – 10
Grammar – 20
Clarity and coherency – 20
five elements – 25
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Published: Jan 14, 2018
Latest Revision: Jan 14, 2018
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