cinderella♥

Once upon a time

A beautiful girl named Cinderella lived in a palace with her step and pmother stepmother and her daughters .

Cinderella`s   job was to serve them.

One day the king decided to make a ball, when the girls heard about it they decided they had nad to go but Cinderella

Was not allowed to come. she needs do work she had to saty and work. 

When the girls went to the prom Cinderella saw the fairy and she welped helped her go to the prom but told  her she needs to come back at midnight.  tocome bake at micnignt

At midnignt Cinderella ran home to her house and on her way to her house she lost her shue shoe

The king was her looking looked for the girl that lost her shoe. to fit her the shue. when The king he found Cinderella and the shoe fitted her. The king and cinderella  they got married and Lived lived happily ever after!!!!

Yuval

Excellent Job!!!

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