Third Book of Children’s Book Videos

by Mel Rosenberg - מל רוזנברג

After fruitful careers as a scientist and inventor I've gone back to what I love most - writing children's books Read More

Joined Oct 2013
Published Books 1559

אלמנטים של ספר ילדים טוב ENGLISH FOLLOWS SCROLL DOWN

כותרת חזקה, שם של הדמות המרכזית

הסיפור מתחיל מיד או מהר

סביבה מעניינת

‘דמות ראשית אמפטית – ‘להציל את החתול

רצון עז להפוך את הדף

מבחן הפשטות – לספר את הסיפור משפט אחד

נושא אוניברסלי

נקודת מבט

אלמנטים חוזרים

פרוזה לירית

מקום לקורא

מקום למאייר

מספר מינימלי של דמויות

סיפור טוב – קורה משהו, הדמות הראשית מאותגרת

יותר להראות, פחות לספר

הומור, אירוניה, הגזמה

סיום משביע ומפתיע (+חוזר להתחלה)

הדמות הראשית לומדת לקח

מוסר השכל אינו מוביל

חוק השלושה

כל מילה חשובה

חריזה למקצוענים בלבד

Story checklist:

Strong Title

Gets going quickly

Interesting Setting

Empathetic Main Character (and name)

Main Character has a problem/question/threat/desire

Great page turns

Save the Cat moment

Wonderful story (something happens, for example main character is challenged)

Keep it simple – The one sentence test

Universal theme

Point of view

Repeating elements

Lyrical prose

Space for reader – reader response theory

Space for illustrator

Only as many characters as you need

More showing, less telling

Humor, irony, exaggeration

Satisfying and surprising ending – Does it turn back to start?

Main Character learns a lesson

Rule of three

Moral only in the background

Rhyming is only for ‘pros’.

Each word is important!!!

Lots of books read aloud right here!!

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Michelle Knudsen grew up on this story.

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love this one for its humor

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Suzy Evans likes this one, and rightly so!

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comp for the marmalade monster story </p>

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robert munsch

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This could be a comp for Grandpa books

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Erin Casey Westin loves the stuff of stars.

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No Fuzzball, a favorite of erin casey westin, along with mice skating and rex wrecks it

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Welcome!

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recommended by Jennifer Unter

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Tara Lazar

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Tammi Sauer

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The heart and the bottle

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https://www.panmacmillan.com.au/9781624146909/

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https://www.encyclopedia.com/children/scholarly-magazines/foley-greg-e-1969

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Editorial Reviews

About the Author

Jack Canfield is an award-winning speaker and an internationally recognized leader in personal development and peak performance strategies. As the co-creator of the Chicken Soup for the Soul® series, he’s taught millions of individuals his formulas for success. He is the author and co-author of more than 150 books (including 66 bestsellers) with more than 100 million copies in print in 47 languages around the world. His bestselling book, The Success Principles has been hailed as the new self-improvement classic.

Miriam Laundry is a sought-after speaker at schools nationwide. She is the coauthor, with Jack Canfield, of The Big, Bad Bully, and the author of I CAN Believe in Myself, I CAN Make a Difference, and I CAN Be Me. On an average year, she visits 100 schools speaking to 50,000 children. She set a Guinness World Record on May 7, 2014 for the largest online book discussion in a 24-hour period. More than 100,000 children and adults participated in this record with the purpose of promoting positive mental health. Her books have also received numerous book awards including a Mom’s Choice Award and a Readers Favorite International Award. Miriam was also awarded the 2014 Winspiration Award.

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