cinderella♥

Once upon a time in a small village, lived a girl and her name was Cinderella.

Cinderella was among the rich in the village,

but her mother died when she wes onli only 5 years old.

Two weeks after her 16th birfday, Cinderella‘s father got married.

She had two Spoiled girls in at Cinderella’s age. and together they were 3 sisters.

After a few weeks Cinderella‘s father died,

and then, Cinderella saw how terrible her stepmother wes, she wes evil.

Cinderella only friends were the animals.

After two years, message declared:” the prince will hold a ball, and choose his future bride.

Cinderella really wanted to go to the bell ball, but her stepmother didn’t let her, she give’s gave her chores to do and she said:” if you don’t finish your chores and get a dress you can’t go to the bell ball.

Cinderella finished her chores but she didn’t have a her dress. and she can’t go to the bell.

After her sisters and her stepmother left go, the Blue Fairy comes came and maide made her a dress. ?and wey to go to the ball.

at the bell ball she denced with the prince and they lived heppiy happily ever apter.

Maayan –

Excellent Job!!!

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