cinderella♥☺

Once upon a time there was an orphaned child named Cinderella. Cinderella’s father remarried and the woman had two daughters.

After her father’s death, the stepmother and her daughters worked Cinderella in the housework.

One day Cinderella arrived at Cinderella’s house for an invitation to the prince’s ball לא הבנתי את המשפט. Cinderella and her step sisters were thrilled but Cinderella’s stepmother forbade her to go to the ball.

The day of the ball came and Cinderella was left alone in the house. Everyone went to the ball except Cinderella.
Cinderella was crying and suddenly her fairy god mother? came in and gave Cinderella a beautiful dress and a pair of high heels made of glass, the pumpkin turned into a carriage and the mice to the horses.

With the carriage and the horses, Cinderella came to the palace תעבירי לתחילת הדף , she met the prince, and danced with him all evening, but she remembered that the fairy had said told her that at midnight the beautiful dress would return to being a nightgown, the horses to the mice and the carriage to the pumpkin.

At midnight when she danced with Prince Bracha Cinderella ran quickly and dropped one of her shoes but could not stop and take the shoe .
The next morning the Prince looked for Cinderella in the whole kingdom and with the help of the shoe he found her.

They got married and lived happily ever after.

spelling – 10

grammar – 20

clarity and cpherency – 35

five elements of a fairy tail – 35

100

excellent !