BEAUTY AND THE BEAST

Once upon a time there was a beautiful girl named bell,Bell   who lived with her father in a small village and loved to read boox.books

Her  father used to go on trips to find food and sell it in the city.

her  Her  beauty attracted the attention of a masculme  masculine   hunter named max,  Max but bell Bell  thinks   thought he is  was  rude and politely refused his marriage proposal.

With the help of the horse that returned without her father, bell   Bell manage  managed  to find the way to a castle where her father is   was being held.

When she turned around, she saw a huge and ferightening beast.

Belle’s father warned her agfainst   against the beast but he invited bell  Bell  to  for dinner because is it was his oly hope for true love.

She refused his request and fled the castle on her horse

but was attacked by wolves and the beast saved her.

In the days after, bell  Bell discovered the goodness of the beast.

One evening the beast invited bell back to for dinner and belle  Bell agreed.

As they danced together in the ballroom, the bast  beast realized he was

in love with belle  Bell ,because of his love, the beast gave everything and allowed bell  Bell

to return to her father.

When max  Max listen the Bell ffectionately    heard of Bell’s affection  to the for beast he was filled with

jealousy and returned to the castle.

Max fought the beast and max fell off the roof, belle  Bell saving saved the beast

and she said  told him “I LOVE YOU”. 

a soon as she said this, the last petal of the rose fell

and the Bast  beast began to change into a handsome prince and  they

lived happily ever after. THE END

Shiri

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