Cinderella of ballet

Once upon a time there was a little girl name Maddie,

she was a curious and a beautifal girl.

The little girl lived in a place far away frome her family called Ziegler.

Everything was happy and fun, but then her mother got sick and died.

Maddie was very sad and she didn’t talk to enyone ecept her dad and

didn’t want to come out of her leave her house.

In Ziegler town, when you are a girl over the age of seven,

you have three opshions, go to ballet cllases, art cllases

or go to another town…

Maddie went to a ballet cllases and she was the best, and that made her happy.

One day maddie and her team were invited to dance ate   at the prince prom,. and Maddie got the main part, her team didnt love the  that fact,  that she got the main part because she was new, so they talled her the wrong date to come and dance at the prince prom.

But they The team weren’t smart, one of the girls post a story in instegram and Maddie saw it, that  she saw that the girls are at  in the prince‘s prom.

but Maddie she didn’t stay home, she ran to the prom and made it!

The girls told her that if she will get close to the prince they will take her out of the team.

They danced and danced and in the last move her shoe come came out of her  fell down from of her leg and she ran away.

The prince fall in love with her, and took her shoe,

he wanted to to find her.

One day he came to the dance class and tried to find maddie,

and when he gave her shoe back the shoe she fell in love.

Since then, there are happy together.

Agam.m

spelling – 10

grammar – 20

clarity and cpherency – 35

five elements of a fairy tail – 35

100

excellent !