Once upon a time,

There was a beautiful girl named Belle that lived in a french village. and her

father worked in a book shop and had a big debt to the king of the village Geston.

Geston came to the village after a war and all the girls loved him apart from belle.

Geston loved only one girl and she is belle,geston want to marry with belle but she escaped from him.

Suddenly there was there a storm and belle fled to the castle.

In the castle lived a Beast and talking tools. Tthe talking tools were like that this because one day the Beast was not generous  

to bring an didn’t let an old woman into his palace.

To break the spellhe spell he needeed someone to love him.

when the Beast saw belle he locked her in a room.

The talking tools told her to come for the dinner but she didn’t want to go.

One day belle wanted to see what’s in the castle. 

she saw a flower garden and the beast came and tell told her all about the castle, he said that in the castle there is

 a library and they went there.In the library there was a lot of books and she asked hem him a lot of questions.

He said the books were from his father.

Suddnely the Beast remembered that in the castl there is a ball, he he asked her if she wanted to

dance with him and she said “YES!”. They loved each other. slowly and Then then Geston came  to fight

with the Beast for belle’s heart and the Beast won! the spell was broken and all  of the talking tools were became poeple and the Beast became  a beautifule prince!

THE END!

Talia

Excellent Job!!!

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