Burned cookies

by Nilay ÖZTÜRK

Artwork: TEAM 3

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Burned cookies

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Artwork: TEAM 3

  • Joined Jan 2021
  • Published Books 3
This is the Team3 story

 The wind was blowing gently and it was wiping the brown leaves away. The sound of the nature was quite peaceful, however, the streets were full of people who got caught up in the flow of life and they were so busy to hear it…

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At this time the girl dropped her head for a moment and she closed her eyes and took a deep breath to keep calm.With tears in her eyes she thought her family whom she lost in a traffic accident  four months ago

 

Everyone around her was happy, and she wanted to be happy too. Everyone looking at her strangely. Her friend was the only person she could share her secrets with. They was excluding by the students, because they were different

 

The beautiful side of humanity (title)***

beauty of empathy (title)

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Jenny has a friend called Bryan, that also lost his parents at an accident and he ended up on a wheelchair

 

 

While Jenny  was looking her family album ,the bell rang and ,a best neighbour ,best friend  Bryan in a wheelchair came her .After the accident  aunt Laura moved to Jenny ’s house to support her because she was only 16 years old .  When Jenny saw her best friend in the living room she was deeply affected and both of their eyes filled with tears . Almost every day Bryan  tried to visit her because he believed that they would heal eachother because they understood  how they felt in a day

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her close friend who lost her closest relatives could understand very well Jenny (yunus emre )

 

I think, characters shouldn’t know each other. While our characters continue their lives, meet at a important time and event to bouth they can become friends after this event and tell each other what they have difficulties about themselves(rukiye)

 

I think: When they both meet each other, they also meet theyr new enemy that has a dark past and also has some trauma(benat )

 

Jenny’s teaching these feelings to other people(umutcan)

They meet on theraphy (benat)

I think title can be ‘The disappearance of tears or The derstruction of tears’ Mehlika)

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Jenny may be someone who has been ostracized by society for her skin burns, and so the two of them may have met in therapy.

 

because they overcome difficulties by helping each other

it would be better if she lost her family in the fire

 

Jenny may meet new person in the school and new person may be bad person and she/he learn to empathy after many event

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